A2 Soap Trailer - Before Feedback

Above is my Soap trailer draft, before i got feedback from my audience. There are still some factors that i need to change because of what my audience said about my trailer. I have taken this into account and have changed these factors for my final trailer. By getting feedback it helped me understand what audience wanted, so in a way it was a practice at what i thought was good but then also going furthur and improving on this.